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 Post subject: Povesti Inuyasha
PostPosted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 1:24 pm 
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Salutari! Va propun sa scriem povesti! Vreti? Inventate, cum ar veni o continuare facuta de noi, dupa cum ne place, desigur avand la baza cele 167 de episoade al seriei Inuyasha. O sa incep eu. Sper sa va placa...


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o poveste alternativa, pentru ca deja acum o sa avem una In Final Act. :ochelari:

be my guest. nu ma pricep la scris povesti dar cu siguranta am sa le citesc pe cele scrise de tine sau de altii.

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Capitolul I
O zi de poveste

O zi frumoasa de vara se ivea la orizont. Kagome luase vacanta (vacanta de vara) si s-a hotarat sa petreaca mai mult timp in era feudala alaturi de prietenii ei, tot aveau de refacut giuvaierul. Cu ocazia vacantei mama lui Kagome a cumparat bilete la mare pentru o saptamana pentru ea si familie. Urma sa mearga si Kagome, dar a aparut o ,,mica" problema... :rolleyes:
Kagome tocmai terminase de povestit despre plecarea ei cand Inuyasha i-a interzis sa mearga.
-Ai de recuperat giuvaierul!i-a zis el.
Atunci ea s-a suparat si a plecat in padure si s-a ascuns intr-o pestera, suparata ca Inuyasha nu se bucura pentru ea. Abea astepta sa plece a doua zi, isi facuse planul: facea bagajele cand se intorcea din fantana, a doua zi pleca si apoi plaja!
Bineinteles ca Inuyasha a plecat sa o caute pe Kagome dupa ce l-au batut la cap Miroku , Shippo, Sango si chiar Kirara. Oricum ar fi plecat, doar tinea la ea, nu?
A gasit repede pestera in care era, ba mai mult , si-a dat seama ca nu era prea rezistenta. A mai sarit o data si a ajuns in ea unde i s-a agatat teaca cu tot cu sabie de un copac de langa, astfel dezechilibrandu-se si aterizand la picioarele lui Kagome, care tresari, vadit mirata de intrarea sa. Apoi acesta a vrut s-o ia si sa plece, dar Kagome n-avrut fiind inca suparata. Inuyasha tocmai realizase ca-i disparuse sabia si vroia cu atat mai mult sa iese. Kagome zicea nu si aunci s-au luat la cearta si din cauza nervilor Kagome a izbucnit: Sezi, Sezi ,Sezi....Pestera a inceput sa se cutremure de la cazaturile lu Inuyasha si s-a prabusit intrarea si peste sabie, blocandu-i acolo. Bolovani au cazut si peste sabia lui aproape
ingropand-o. Desi restul grupului plecase dupa Inuyasha ca sa o caute pe Kagome, nu aveau d unde sa stie ce se intamplase.
Din fericire n-au patit nimic si poate ar fi iesit daca nu se luau iar la cearta din cauza pesterii cazute. Brusc Inuyasha s-a transformat in om. Cu toata agitatia produsa de plecarea la mare a lui Kagome uitasera ca in seara aceea va fi luna plina.
Acasa la Kagome se faceau pregatiri.
-De ce intarzie, Kagome?intreaba Sota.
-Poate ca s-a razgandit, se gandi bunicul.
-Noi oricum plecam la ora stabilita, altfel pierdem avionul! incheie mama lui Kagome, ne avand habar de ce a patit fiica ei.
Era feudala: Kagome si Inuyasha nu se mai certau, dar le era cam foame si sete. Aveau aer datorita crapaturilor pesterii. Era cam frig. Miroku, Sango si Shippo ii cautau de ore intregi calare pe Kirara. Erau putin ingrijorati deoarece nu stiau daca macar s-au intalnit. Tot zburand ei asa au dat peste Koga si amicii lui.
Afland Koga ca scumpa lui Kagome e de gasit pornira toti sa o caute.
In pestera Kagome si Inuyasha discutau:
-O sa pierd excursia daca nu iesim! realiza Kagome trista.
-E vina mea ca tu ai inceput sa tipi pe mine?intrba Inuyasha.
- Nu, zise Kagome gandindu-se ca la urma urmei fusese vina ei si gandindu-se ca daca era mai calma acum ar fi fost acasa, izbucni in plans.
- E vina meaaaa!incepu ea plangand.
- Nu, nu e vina ta! Nu mai plange, te rog!incepu Inuyasha speriat de reactiile lui Kagome. E vina mea!
-E numai vina mea! continua Kagome.
-Ba nu!
-Ba da!
-Ba nu!
-Ba da si sezi iar! spuse Kagome.
Inuyasha cazu la pamant. Din fericire nu se mai prabusi nimic. Kagome incepu sa rada. Inuyasha bucuros in sinea sa ca rade si e fericita se rasti la ea, ce, ce-am facut acum?!
Pana la urma radeau amandoi. Fiind ca era tarziu se hotarara sa se culce. Inuyasha o acoperi pe Kagome cu bluza lui, era frig si astfel cei doi adormira.
A doua zi dimineata..
-Priveste Lord Sesshomaru-sama! Luceste ceva acolo! Pare a fi o sabie!
Sesshomaru se uita atent, parea sabia fratelui sau. Rin inca dormea pe Ah-un. Atunci acesta cu o lovitura de sabie darma toate acele pietre care blocau sabia mult dorita.
In dimineata aceea batea un vanticel rece care se strecura in pestera. Inuyasha si Kagome se trezesc amandoi. De frig se bagasera unul in altul. Vazandu-se asa apropiati tresarira si se ridicara. Inuyasha era iar semidemon. O bubuitura puternica urmata de sabia lui Inuyasha care trecu pe langa ei si se infipse in perete. Lumina navali in pestera si in prag aparu cineva:
-Lord Sesshomaru-sama! Sabia e aici, alaturi de fratele si prietena acestuia. Ce? Cum? zise Jaken.
Sesshomaru isi da seama ca iar nu are vreo sansa sa ia sabia, pleaca. Inuyasha isi recupereaza sabia. Pleaca cu Kagome. Totusi relatia lor avansa... :giveheart:


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Sper sa va placa, scuzati ortografia unde este cazul. Ms pt comentariu. Astept parerile si criticile voaste... :smile2:


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Daca va plac am sa mai postez, e prima mea incercare. Nu stiu cat de des, dar voi inceca sa pun cand trebuie, astept de asemenea si povestile voastre! VA ASTEPT!!!!!! :good:


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PostPosted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 3:14 pm 
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ca si side-story e draguta, am insa o mare obiectie: Inuyasha nu si-ar lasa niciodata de bunavoie sabia. chiar daca ar vrea sa lase un semn, ar folosi altceva....sa nu uitam ca sabia este obiectul care-l impiedica sa se transforme in demon deplin si stim cu totii ce fel de demon.

oricum, ca prima poveste e ok

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Trebuia sa scap de sabie ar fi putut iesi...sunt la inceput cum ai zis si tu. Ma bucur ca iti place in schimb...Nu mi-a venit nimic pe moment...Daca ai vreo idee o astept nerabdatoare...Mereu sunt bune si unele imunatatiri... :ok:


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prin exercitiu o sa-ti dai drumu' la scris...n-ai nevoie de ideile altora, trebuie doar sa tii cont de criticile constructive :girlcool:

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Ok, o sa editez acolo, ca asa am mai zis ca scriu povesti, dar n-am si facuto, mereu m-am apucat si dupa aceea am lasat... :good:


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nu e nevoie sa editezi....situatia e salvata de faptul ca Inu s-a transformat in om, fiind luna plina

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